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Review Environment

 

Submission ID: 6702533a-06c9-4ddf-b8a6-536391bbbeb8

Review date: March 21, 2024

Version reviewed: 1.0

 

Guideline 2.1 - Performance - App Completeness

 

Your app or its metadata does not appear to include complete and final content. Specifically, your app includes placeholder content under Event.

 

App Store users expect the apps they download to be ready for public use. Apps on the store shouldn't include placeholder or incomplete content or information.

 

Next Steps

 

To resolve this issue, please revise your app and metadata so that all of its content is complete and final.

 

For example:

 

- Your app binary or metadata should not include "lorem ipsum" text. 

- App metadata should not include placeholder screenshots, such as "screenshot coming soon."

Resources 

 

Learn how to create an engaging App Store product page.

 

 

Guideline 5.1.1 - Legal - Privacy - Data Collection and Storage

5.1.1(ii) Permission Apps that collect user or usage data must secure user consent for the collection, even if such data is considered to be anonymous at the time of or immediately following collection. Paid functionality must not be dependent on or require a user to grant access to this data. Apps must also provide the customer with an easily accessible and understandable way to withdraw consent. Ensure your purpose strings clearly and completely describe your use of the data. Apps that collect data for a legitimate interest without consent by relying on the terms of the European Union’s GeneralData Protection Regulation ("GDPR") or similar statute must comply with all terms of that law.

 

Issue Description

 

One or more purpose strings in the app do not sufficiently explain the use of protected resources. Purpose strings must clearly and completely describe the app's use of data and, in most cases, provide an example of how the data will be used.

 

Examples of unclear purpose strings:

 

- "App would like to access your Contacts"

- "App needs microphone access"

 

Next Steps

 

Update the location purpose string to explain how the app will use the requested information and provide an example of how the data will be used. See the attached screenshot.

 

Resources

 

- See examples of helpful, informative purpose strings.

- Review a list of relevant property list keys.

 

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회신내용

Regarding Guideline 2.1 - Performance - App Completion, we will first disable the event button function to complete the functionality. After the functionality is fully implemented, we will apply it in the next version.

 

Regarding Guideline 5.1.1 - Legal - Privacy - Data Collection and Storage, we will specify the purpose of the user location data collection and storage by saying that the collected user location information is used to provide weather and map information and learning paths based on the current location.

(수집한 사용자 위치 정보는 현재 위치에 기반한 날씨 및 지도 정보, 러닝 경로 제공을 위해 사용됩니다. in Korean)